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Ancient
Gods

A poem
by Allen McGill


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The triangular sail of the felucca shows white against the darkening sky.
Its peak rises above the hills of the sacred West Bank, across the Nile
from ancient Luxor. I have the boatman cross slowly, eager to savor the
gentle smells and sounds of the Egyptian night.

faint stars
emerge from the blue
boatmen exchange calls

A horse-drawn buggy waits on the far shore to carry me to the Valley
Of The Kings. The carriage jounces along cobbled streets—straining
leather, clopping hooves—through communities lit only by light through
open doors and windows. Men in long robes, skull caps. Smell of lamb
roasting on a spit.

smoke curls
from tabletop hookahs
reedy music

The road smooths, traffic grows. A lighted plaza opens to my view
beyond cars and wagons. Djeser Djeseru! "Splendor of Splendors!"
The 3,000 year old temple of Queen Hatshepsut, Egypt's only female
Pharaoh, huddled at the base of a sheer cliff.

Awash in light, the long stairway rises to the majestic building;
sphinxes crouch along each side. Musicians, the Cairo opera ballet,
elaborate sets and five-thousand eager aficionados wait beneath
the clear Egyptian sky.

murmurs of awe
rise into the evening
instruments are tuned

As the overture begins, I lean forward, unable to relax—the magnificent
sounds of Verdi's music permeates the air. I watch, listen, hold my
breath. Performers—hundreds of them—enter the lower stage area:
Aida, Radames and Amneris adorned in bejeweled, golden costumes.

More important, their voices richer and more glorious.

warm evening
I shiver with chills
of pleasure

Luxuriating in the lush sights and sound, I await the opera's highlight;
the Triumphal March. On cue, trumpets blare, rising in pitch and tempo.
Hundreds more performers appear on the top steps to descend slowly,
spreading out like a living, vividly colored fan. Orchestra and voices
blend, build to a crescendo.

Excitement reaches a peak that neither I nor the rest of the audience
can contain. Someone stands—another—a few more. I rise to join
them, shouting "Bravo!" time and again. Soon, the entire audience is
on its feet—the frenzied roar blots out the music—audience in ecstasy.

celebration—
resurrection of
the ancient gods

Those on stage freeze, as does the orchestra, until the cacophony
gradually quells itself.

After the finale I rise, a bit embarrassed by my enthusiastic outburst,
to seek a taxi back to Luxor. A new route this time, befitting a majestic
experience—across the new bridge built and bedecked in honor of Aida.

the Nile flows past—
gold lotus blossoms strewn
on a red carpet

Previously published as "Tribute To The Gods" in flashquake.

Copyright 2006 by Allen McGill

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Allen McGillAllen writes:
As an airline exec, I had the opportunity to travel widely. Egypt was my first long-distance destination, having been enamored of the country's history since I was a child. The Sphinx and Pyramids were of just secondary interest after the temples and tombs near Luxor. The opera Aida, set in ancient Egypt, was performed at Queen Hatshepsut's temple only a few times, cancelled due to modern politics. I missed it, but after much research imagined the magnificence of the productions . . . the stuff of poetry.

Allen McGill, originally from NYC, now lives, writes, acts, and directs theatre in Mexico. His published fiction, non-fiction, poetry, plays, photos, etc., have won awards and appeared in: HYT Times, The Writer, Newsday, Literary Potpourri, Poetry Midwest, QLRS, Herons Nest, Frogpond, Modern Haiku, World Haiku Review, and many others. He is a former member of PEN. He was an invited guest at the First World Poetry Festival in Taiwan 2005, haibun editor for Simply Haiku, and two of his plays have been professionally produced in Sacramento and LA. He can be reached via email at aljons@yahoo.com or through his website: http://tinyurl.com/m7il.

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