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Platform

Platform

A poem by Miriam Sagan

'We've had a good run,' she said to me.
We were fifty, and standing on the platform
In an east coast city—with its attendant clouds of steam
The suggestion of passage, late winter.
An odd, if sweet, thing to say
Considering the things
That had happened to us
Both as children, and as women,
Bad things, but infrequently
Punctuating other years
When we'd prospered.
And then there were the aggravating
Things that got in the way of our wills
In the long run, these were more upsetting
Than any final tragedy.
But she was right of course
We weren't through yet
And our coats, to the ankle, were good
And our hats were amusing
And of course she was right
After all, we were still friends.

Copyright 2006 by Miriam Sagan

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Miriam SaganMiriam writes:
"Platform" came directly out of the experience described in it, but oddly I wrote the poem a few years later. I was rushing off to work when suddenly I was flooded with the remembered emotion of the scene and had to sit down and write.

Miriam Sagan is the author of more than twenty books, including Searching for a Mustard Seed: A Young Widow's Unconventional Story (memoir, Quality Words in Print, 2004; Winner Best Memoir from Independent Publishers, 2004), Rag Trade (poetry, La Alameda, 2004), The Widow's Coat (poetry, Ahsahta Pres, 1999), The Art of Love (poetry, La Alameda Press, 1994), Coastal Lives (fiction, Center Press, 1991), and Unbroken Line: Writing in the Lineage of Poetry (nonfiction, Sherman Asher, 1999), which Robert Creeley called "A work of quiet compassion and great heart." With Sharon Niederman, Miriam is the editor of New Mexico Poetry Renaissance (Red Crane, 1994; Winner of the Border Regional Library Association Award and Honorable Mention, Benjamin Franklin Award), and with Joan Logghe of Another Desert: The Jewish Poetry of New Mexico (Sherman Asher, 1998). She and her late husband Robert Winson wrote Dirty Laundry: 100 Days in a Zen Monastery, a joint diary (La Alameda, 1997; New World Library, 1999). Her work has appeared internationally in two hundred magazines. She writes book columns for the Santa Fe New Mexican and New Mexico Magazine, and a poetry column for Writer's Digest. Miriam directs the creative writing program at the Santa Fe Community College, and has taught at the College of Santa Fe, University of New Mexico, Taos Institute of the Arts, Aspen Writer's Conference, around the country, and online. She has held residency grants at Yaddo and MacDowell, and is the recipient of a grant from The Barbara Deming Foundation/Money for Women and a Lannan Foundation Marfa Residency. Miriam can be reached via email at: MSagan1035@aol.com.

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